The Objective Observation at the Circus

At the Circus

At the circus, we saw elephants, tightrope walkers, trapeze artists, and ridiculous clowns. Which change to the sentence would make it more objective?

Options for Objective Change:

A. Removing the word "ridiculous"
B. Adding "amazing" before the word "ridiculous"
C. Changing "we" to "he" or "she"
D. Changing "saw" to "witnessed"

Objective Analysis:

The correct option is A. To be objective means to present situations as they are without adding any personal opinion to the statements that are made. In the sentence given above, the word ridiculous shows the personal opinion of the speaker. Removing the word 'ridiculous' will thus make the sentence more objective.

Which change to the sentence would make it more objective?

A. Removing the word "ridiculous"

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